The Made up Paragraph

Believe it or not,my best friend ,Mary B built a boat out of wood,Super Glue and a Computer that she found in her Dad’s Basment. We set out to Canada where we had a Snow-Ball fight. After watching out for Snow-Balls,we found a Canadin building a Boat of his own. It was alot cooler than ours. He rode us home just in time for History class.

3 Comments


  1. Hey Britney,
    That paragraph is in one word weird. I don’ believe that Mary could build a boat and sail to Canada in it. This is really a wacky paragraph.
    Siabhaon

        Posted August 23, 2010, 4:14 am

  2. Hi Britney,
    Thats one brilliant paragraph. It’s really believable too, keep it up! :D

        Posted August 29, 2010, 6:33 am

  3. Hi briteny it’s patrick

    that paragraph is th best one that i have read all term. it is so cool at Kean Kean school. it is alot difrin ther dut it is the best school i have ben to! haw is it going at st patrick’s? i hop you are haveing fun. you shod have seen the crismis dspay.

    patrick :)

        Posted November 18, 2010, 7:35 pm

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